The diagram below shows the recycling process of aluminum cans. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevent.
The chart describes the recycling process of aluminium cans. It clearly explains each step
as well as
highlights its significance.
Firstly
, used cans have to be thrown away in trash bins which are dedicated to recycling materials, and later be collected by garbage trucks. Before they are heated and melted, there is a necessity to hold a process of their cleaning, sorting, and compressing which takes place in special factories and is made by both workers and machines. A melted aluminium has been rolled into a special layer with a thickness of 2.5 to 6 mm. Subsequently
, their shape is reformed in order to create the same look as before. Such
cans are ready to be reused – they are filled with soda and the special stickers containing the names of the brand are stuck to them. After
this
, they can be sent to shops. In the UK 74% of aluminium is recycled in this
way.Submitted by kuba.glogowski on
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