the graph below shows the production levels of the main kinds of the fuel in the UK between 1981 and 2000. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant

the graph below shows the production levels of the main kinds of the fuel in the UK between 1981 and 2000. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant
The graph provides a comparison of fuel production levels in the UK between 1981 and 2000.
Overall
,
Petroleum
has the highest
level
of production in the timeframe,
whereas
coal and natural
gas
see a fluctuating
level
subsequently
. In 1981,
petroleum
and coal started production with roughly 100
million
tonnes
of power heat,
while
natural
gas
initially
with under 50
million
tonnes
in that particular year. Four years in period,
petroleum
rose dramatically to 140
tonnes
and settled for 5 years before declining excessively to 100
million
tonnes
of energy units in 1991.
Moreover
, in 1984, Coal declined by roughly under 50
million
tonnes
,
while
natural
gas
remained steady from the initial year. In 1991,
although
natural
gas
climbed significantly to 100
million
tonnes
till the end of the timespan, coal showed a notable decrease to lower than 40
million
tonnes
level
,
additionally
,
petroleum
enlarged the
level
to 140
million
tonnes
at the end
of the year.
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