The table shows data about underground railway systems in six major citites with date opened, kilometres of route and passenger numbers per year in millions Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, making comparison where relevant.
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The table gives information on subway systems in six leading cities with opening date, kilometres of route and the number of
passangers
per year.
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passengers
Overall
, it is clear that
London
stood first in terms of the number of rout
and Correct your spelling
routes
passangers
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passengers
due to
its early opening date. It is noteworthy that although
Los
Angeles was opened after Kyoto
, Los
Angles
underground railways system passed more Correct your spelling
Angeles
kilometeres
and had more passengers as well.
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kilometres
London
had the most ancient underground railways system which was opened about 138 years earlier than Los
Angles
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Angeles
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Moreover
, London
system had first rank in terms of Correct article usage
the London
kilomteres
of rout which was about 195 Correct your spelling
kilometres
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more Correct your spelling
kilometres
that
second rank Paris and 239 Correct word choice
than
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more Correct your spelling
kilometres
that
Tokyo as third rank. Correct word choice
than
Kyoto
had the lowest number of kilometeres
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kilometres
although
, it was opened about 20 yerars
earlier than Correct your spelling
years
Los
Angeles.
Despite the early opening date of London
Subways, Tokyo and Paris had more passangers
respectively 1927 and 1191.Notably, Correct your spelling
passengers
although
Los
Angles
underground railways Correct your spelling
Angeles
was
opened about 20 years after Correct subject-verb agreement
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Kyoto
, Los
Angles
subways carried about 5 Correct your spelling
Angeles
passangers
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Kyoto
with 50 passangers
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passengers
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