The chart below shows the promotions of British students at one university in England who were able to speak other languages in addition to English in 2000 and 2010. Summarise and write the information in about 150 words making relevant comparisons

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A glance at the given pie charts depicts the percentages of Brits people who were

students

at the same university in England and

also

the

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they

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are able to speak other

languages

except

English

in 2000 and 2010.

Overall

, in both 2000 and 2010, the highest number of

students

could speak only Spanish other than

English

In contrast

, the lowest number of

students

could speak German as a second language in these specific years. Moving on to more details, a staggering 30% of the total

students

were educated only in Spanish in the year 2000. Not only do a negligible 10 % of

English

students

study two other

languages

, but 10 % of

English

students

also

study only German in 2000. It is obvious that the highest level of proportion of British

students

study only Spanish

besides

English

in 2010 35%.

Moreover

second,

in terms of the number of

students

who were able to speak

languages

other than

English

, it was related to people who had the capability to speak two other

languages

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