The diagram below shows how leather goods are produced.
The diagram details the process of treating animal
skin
to produce leather
goods.
Overall
, the production of leather
goods involves ten steps, commencing with the collection the
dried animal hide and culminating Change preposition
of the
the
finished product.
The first step of producing Change preposition
in the
leather
goods is the transportation of the dried animal skin
to a factory to prepare them for further
stages. After being washed in the liquid combined water
and lime, the animal Change preposition
with water
skin
continues to be soaked in the lime and then
they are flattened by a machine. Following a process of flattening, the flattened animal hide
in tannin which is Correct subject-verb agreement
hides
the
liquid mixture of water and vegetable matter. Afterwards, the treated animal Correct article usage
a
skin
is polished to become glossy. These stages are referred to as treating the rough animal skin
. The final step is delivery
Correct article usage
the delivery
the
ultimate product Change preposition
of the
such
as leather
shoes, leather
bags, to contribute to the shops or Correct word choice
or leather
supermarket
for sale.Fix the agreement mistake
supermarkets
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