The diagram below shows how leather goods are produced.

The diagram below shows how leather goods are produced.
The diagram details the process of treating animal
skin
to produce
leather
goods.
Overall
, the production of
leather
goods involves ten steps, commencing with the collection
the
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dried animal hide and culminating
the
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in the
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finished product. The first step of producing
leather
goods is the transportation of the dried animal
skin
to a factory to prepare them for
further
stages. After being washed in the liquid combined
water
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and lime, the animal
skin
continues to be soaked in the lime and
then
they are flattened by a machine. Following a process of flattening, the flattened animal
hide
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hides
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in tannin which is
the
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a
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liquid mixture of water and vegetable matter. Afterwards, the treated animal
skin
is polished to become glossy. These stages are referred to as treating the rough animal
skin
. The final step is
delivery
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the delivery
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the
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of the
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ultimate product
such
as
leather
shoes,
leather
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or leather
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bags, to contribute to the shops or
supermarket
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supermarkets
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for sale.
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