The diagram below shows how leather goods are produced.

The diagram below shows how leather goods are produced.
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The diagram details the process of treating animal
skin
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to produce
leather
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goods.
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, the production of
leather
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goods involves ten steps, commencing with the collection
the
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of the
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dried animal hide and culminating
the
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in the
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finished product. The first step of producing
leather
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goods is the transportation of the dried animal
skin
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to a factory to prepare them for
further
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stages. After being washed in the liquid combined
water
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and lime, the animal
skin
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continues to be soaked in the lime and
then
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they are flattened by a machine. Following a process of flattening, the flattened animal
hide
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hides
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in tannin which is
the
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a
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liquid mixture of water and vegetable matter. Afterwards, the treated animal
skin
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is polished to become glossy. These stages are referred to as treating the rough animal
skin
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. The final step is
delivery
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the delivery
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the
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of the
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ultimate product
such
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as
leather
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shoes,
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leather
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or leather
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bags, to contribute to the shops or
supermarket
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supermarkets
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for sale.

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Basic structure: Change the third paragraph.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words skin, leather with synonyms.
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