The bar chart shows the number of volunteers in New Zealand who helped in sports organizations in 2010. The pie chart illustrates the number of volunteers doing different types of jobs for that same period. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The supplied bar chart indicates how many people helped in voluntary
sports
communities in New Use synonyms
Zealand
in 2010. Use synonyms
Moreover
, the provided pie chart demonstrates the Linking Words
percentage
of Use synonyms
volunteers
doing various Use synonyms
sort
of Fix the agreement mistake
sorts
jobs
over the period.
It can be clearly seen that the highest number of Use synonyms
volunteers
in Use synonyms
sports
organisations accounted for Use synonyms
couple
and dependent children. Fix the agreement mistake
couples
However
, the Linking Words
volunteers
of household types did not prefer to do voluntary Use synonyms
jobs
for one parent or Use synonyms
lone
person over the period. Correct article usage
a lone
Moreover
, the highest Linking Words
percentage
of Use synonyms
sports
support Use synonyms
roles
was for Use synonyms
coach
, Fix the agreement mistake
coaches
instructor
or Fix the agreement mistake
instructors
teacher
in New Fix the agreement mistake
teachers
Zealand
.
In 2010, roughly half of the people (49.8%) did voluntary Use synonyms
jobs
for Use synonyms
couple
and dependent children, ( which was the highest Fix the agreement mistake
couples
percentage
of Use synonyms
volunteers
for Use synonyms
sports
organisations over the period) compared to Use synonyms
couple
with no dependent children at 26.9% in New Fix the agreement mistake
couples
Zealand
. Use synonyms
In addition
, the number of Linking Words
sport
support Fix the agreement mistake
sports
roles
for coach, instructor and teacher was 206,000 Use synonyms
volunteers
in New Use synonyms
Zealand
. (Which was the highest Use synonyms
percentage
of Use synonyms
volunteers
for various Use synonyms
jobs
over the whole year).
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In contrast
, the Linking Words
percentage
of Use synonyms
volunteers
Use synonyms
for
helping Change preposition
apply
sports
organisations for one parent or lone person was 10.9% in New Use synonyms
Zealand
in 2010. (Which was the lowest Use synonyms
percentage
of Use synonyms
volunteers
over the total year). Use synonyms
Furthermore
, the number of Linking Words
volunteers
for supporting medical Use synonyms
sport
Change the noun form
sports
roles
or Use synonyms
other
was 62,700 in New Fix the agreement mistake
others
Zealand
in 2010. (Which was the lowest Use synonyms
percentage
of Use synonyms
volunteers
Use synonyms
of
sport support Change preposition
in
roles
over the whole year).Use synonyms
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