The bar chart shows the number of volunteers in New Zealand who helped in sports organizations in 2010. The pie chart illustrates the number of volunteers doing different types of jobs for that same period. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The supplied bar chart indicates how many people helped in voluntary
sports
communities in New Zealand
in 2010. Moreover
, the provided pie chart demonstrates the percentage
of volunteers
doing various sort
of Fix the agreement mistake
sorts
jobs
over the period.
It can be clearly seen that the highest number of volunteers
in sports
organisations accounted for couple
and dependent children. Fix the agreement mistake
couples
However
, the volunteers
of household types did not prefer to do voluntary jobs
for one parent or lone
person over the period. Correct article usage
a lone
Moreover
, the highest percentage
of sports
support roles
was for coach
, Fix the agreement mistake
coaches
instructor
or Fix the agreement mistake
instructors
teacher
in New Fix the agreement mistake
teachers
Zealand
.
In 2010, roughly half of the people (49.8%) did voluntary jobs
for couple
and dependent children, ( which was the highest Fix the agreement mistake
couples
percentage
of volunteers
for sports
organisations over the period) compared to couple
with no dependent children at 26.9% in New Fix the agreement mistake
couples
Zealand
. In addition
, the number of sport
support Fix the agreement mistake
sports
roles
for coach, instructor and teacher was 206,000 volunteers
in New Zealand
. (Which was the highest percentage
of volunteers
for various jobs
over the whole year).
In contrast
, the percentage
of volunteers
for
helping Change preposition
apply
sports
organisations for one parent or lone person was 10.9% in New Zealand
in 2010. (Which was the lowest percentage
of volunteers
over the total year). Furthermore
, the number of volunteers
for supporting medical sport
Change the noun form
sports
roles
or other
was 62,700 in New Fix the agreement mistake
others
Zealand
in 2010. (Which was the lowest percentage
of volunteers
of
sport support Change preposition
in
roles
over the whole year).Submitted by TUTOO on
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Vocabulary: Replace the words sports, zealand, percentage, volunteers, jobs, roles with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "number of" was used 3 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "percentage" was used 7 times.
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