The first chart below shows how energy is used in an average Australian household. the second chart shows the greenhouse gas emissions which result from this energy use. summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparison where relevant.
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The given charts
illustrates
how much greenhouse gas is produced Change the verb form
illustrate
along with
energy consumption by domestic devices in an average Australian habitation.
Overall
, in terms of energetic
usage, heating ,either the environment or water Replace the word
energy
are
the most used. In fact, warming up the house is related to 42% of all energy consumption, Correct subject-verb agreement
is
while
, water heating is a bit less than a third. Therefore
, combining refrigeration, cooling and lighting we obtain a bit more than a tenth of overall
consumption. Lastly
, 15% used other appliance
Fix the agreement mistake
appliances
is left
.
Verb problem
apply
On the other hand
, regarding of
emissions water heating and other appliances combined cause exactly 60% of all emissions. Change preposition
apply
Consequently
, they are the most polluting items on the list. In constrast
, cooling and lighting are the most efficient, consuming respectively three and eight points Correct your spelling
contrast
perctentages
. Correct your spelling
percentages
percentage
At
the end, between Change the preposition
In
them
there are heating and refrigeration since they emitted fifteen and fourteen Add a comma
them,
percent
of gas produced.Change the spelling
per cent
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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "overall".
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Basic structure: Change the third paragraph.
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Vocabulary: Only 3 basic words for charts were used.
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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the second paragraph.
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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the third paragraph.
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