The first chart below shows how energy is used in an average Australian household. the second chart shows the greenhouse gas emissions which result from this energy use. summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparison where relevant.

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illustrates

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how much greenhouse gas is produced

along with

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energy consumption by domestic devices in an average Australian habitation.

Overall

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, in terms of

energetic

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energy

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usage, heating ,either the environment or water

are

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the most used. In fact, warming up the house is related to 42% of all energy consumption,

while

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, water heating is a bit less than a third.

Therefore

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, combining refrigeration, cooling and lighting we obtain a bit more than a tenth of

overall

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consumption.

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, 15% used other

appliance

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appliances

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is left

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.

On the other hand

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, regarding

of

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emissions water heating and other appliances combined cause exactly 60% of all emissions.

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, they are the most polluting items on the list. In

constrast

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contrast

, cooling and lighting are the most efficient, consuming respectively three and eight points

perctentages

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percentages

percentage

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At

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the end, between

them

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there are heating and refrigeration since they emitted fifteen and fourteen

percent

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per cent

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of gas produced.