The table presents information about university-level academic staff in one country. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The table presents information about university-level academic staff in one country.

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The chart depicts the distribution of university academic
staff
based on
courses
in a particular country between 2005 and 2013.
Overall
, employees in all subjects showed an increasing quantity from 2005 to 2013, except agriculture and education.
While
the arts
subject
had the largest comparison between the
number
of
teacher
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teachers
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and
student
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students
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,
medicine
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the medicine
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subject
had the tiniest quantity contrast between the
teacher
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teachers
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and
student
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students
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. In 2005, the
number
of
medicine
staff
was 30,664 and it increased to 36,868
staff
by 2013, making it the largest increment among other
courses
.
Following
this
, the
number
of business
staff
was 23128 which
then
rose to 28,769 by 2013.
In contrast
, the remaining
courses
had just below 20,000
staff
with agriculture workers
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only 1,680 in 2005. By 2013,
while
the
number
of business and
medicine
staff
climbed to more than 22,000, the
number
of
staff
in the other subjects remained under 20,000. Moving to the comparison of
teacher
and student
number
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in 2013, in
arts
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an arts
show examples
subject
, one
teacher
was compared to 12 students, making it the largest gap.
Following
this
, the teachers of architecture, sciences, and humanities
courses
had
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similar
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comparability
to their students, which are 1:11.
On the other hand
, the
subject
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of business, agriculture, and education showed a comparison between an educator to scholars were below 10.
Conversely
,
medicine
course
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courses
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had the least juxtaposition of an educator to their students which is only 1:4.
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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "following this, while".
Vocabulary: Replace the words staff, courses, subject, number, teacher, medicine with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "showed" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "comparison" was used 3 times.
Vocabulary: The word "number of" was used 5 times.

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  • gender distribution
  • academic staff
  • faculties
  • ratios
  • STEM (Science, Technology, Engineering, Mathematics)
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  • disparities
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