The graph below shows the number of shops that closed and the number of new shop that opened in one country between 2011 and 2018. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The graph illustrates the changes
on
the figures Change preposition
in
of
Change preposition
for
shops
that closed and opened.
In 2011, the number
of shop
newly opened was much higher about 2000, but it dropped to under 4000. After 2011, the Change to a plural noun
shops
number
of closed shops
are
shown higher than opening Change the verb form
is
shops
from 2012 to 2014. However
it fell back to under 1000. It appeared the lowest figure on the graph during the period. Closed Add a comma
However,
shops
rised
steadily after 2015, so that the Correct your spelling
rose
risen
rise
number
of them exceeded the number
of opening shops
. The difference between opening and closed shops
was
exists, but the Unnecessary verb
apply
number
of closed shops
remained greater from 2016 to 2018.Submitted by susie0104 on
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