You should spend about 20 minutes on this task. The line graph shows the percentages of Australian export with four countries. The graph below shows the percentage of Australian exports to 4 countries from 1990 to 2012 You should write at least 150 words.

You should spend about 20 minutes on this task.

The line graph shows the percentages of Australian export with four countries.

The graph below shows the percentage of Australian exports to 4 countries from 1990 to 2012

You should write at least 150 words.
The graph illustrates the alterations in percentages of Australian exportation from four different
countries
in a 22-year interval.
Overall
,
while
the exporting
rate
in China and India shows certain
growth
, Japan and the US have shown a general decrease and stagnation throughout the years.
In addition
, certain changes in the rankings between the
countries
are exhibited. On the one hand, in the
countries
that have witnessed
growth
throughout the years, the exporting
rate
in China has witnessed significant
growth
from less than 5% to 30% over 22 years, changing the country's ranking from third to top sometime between 2005 and 2010. Another country that has
also
witnessed
growth
is India, which underwent more than 5% in 2012 from less than 2% in 1990, but in 2010, it reached its apex at more than 7.5% and lightly plummeted back to the bottom rank in 2012.
On the other hand
, some
countries
have shown to be plateaued and dwindled. In Japan,
while
having more than 25% in 1990, has decreased in 1995 to 20% and plateaued and slowly worsened at between 20% and 15%, making it secured second place in 2012.
Furthermore
, in the US, initiated at between 10% and 15%, has decreased in 1995 and went back in 2000 but plummeted again and ended with more than 5% in 2012, making its exporting
rate
virtually tantamount to India's
rate
.
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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "while".
Vocabulary: Replace the words countries, rate, growth with synonyms.
Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "percentages" in your introduction.
Vocabulary: The word "decrease" was used 3 times.
Vocabulary: The word "growth" was used 4 times.
Vocabulary: The word "plummeted" was used 2 times.

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • percentage
  • export
  • trend
  • time period
  • individually
  • comparison
  • significant changes
  • notable anomalies
  • influenced
  • increase
  • decrease
  • fluctuation
  • steady
  • sharp rise
  • sharp decline
  • stagnation
  • data
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