The graph below shows average carbon dioxide (C02) emissions per person in the United Kingdom, Sweden, Italy and Portugal between 1967 and 2007.

The graph below shows average carbon dioxide (C02) emissions per person

in the United Kingdom, Sweden, Italy and Portugal between 1967 and 2007.
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CO2 emissions for each adult in
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Sweden
, Italy, Portugal, and UK in the timeline from 1967 to 2007
Overall
, the United Kingdom was much better in most of the time until 2007. The United Kingdom has a downfall;meanwhile, others have increased As seen from the diagram, in the beginning, the UK has a major average carbon emissions account of nearly 1,
while
Sweden
has almost 8
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.
However
, the British fell until the end of 2007,when
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raised
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rose
but decreased to approximately 6
tonnes
As the graph shows, Italy
initially
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4,but in the
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the situation going
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opposite
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direcrion becuse
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direction because
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Italy
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emision
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emission
emissions
significantly skyrocketed to about 8. In the same year,
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Portugal
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touched
the bottom with a little below 2
tonnes
and
then
it
also
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in the next years because the
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line of
Sweden
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meter
tonnes
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