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The graphs show changes in spending habits of people in UK between 1971 and 2001. Write a report to a university lecturer describing the data.

The graphs show changes in spending habits of people in UK between 1971 and 2001. Write a report to a university lecturer describing the data.
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The above two pie charts
demonstrates
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 a comparison of changes
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that occured
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occured
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occurred
 in
UK
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the UK
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 in
people
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people's
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 spending habits between the years 1971 and 2001.
Overall
, the most significant feature is the percentage of citizens
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who prefered
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prefered
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preferred
 food was 44% in 1971
wich
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which
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 is the highest
propotion
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proportion
.
In addition
 , the
number
 started to decline to 14% in 2001.
While
people
 who showed
cars
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car
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 interest in 2001 had the strongest percentage which is 43%.
Moreover
,
cars
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the cars
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 habits score showed
dramaticaly
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dramatically
 increased from 22% to 43%.
In contrast
, the
number
 of
people
 spending their time with books
recieved
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received
6% in1971
then
 started to
decreased
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decrease
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 gradually to 1% in 2001 .
Furthermore
,
people
 spending their time on
computer
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computers
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 showed
significant
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a significant
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 raising in
number
 from 2% to 12%.
In addition
, the percentage of citizens
have
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who have
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 furniture habits exhibited
approximetaly
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approximately
 similar
score
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scores
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 between the range
8
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of 8
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% and 9%. Related
to
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apply
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people
 who used to go to
resturant
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restaurants
illustrates
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illustrate
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 steady growth in
number
 from 7% in 1971 to 14% in 2001.
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Introduction: The introduction is missing.
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Introduction: The chart intro is missing.
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Introduction: The chart intro is missing.
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Vocabulary: Rephrase your introduction. Words match: 71%.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words people, number with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "showed" was used 3 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "percentage" was used 3 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "significant" was used 2 times.
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