The pie charts show information about energy production in a country in two separate years. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and making comparisons where relevant.

The pie charts show information about energy production in a country in two separate years. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and making comparisons where relevant.
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The two pie charts illustrate the distribution of
energy
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production across five
sources
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(coal, gas,
petro
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petrol
, nuclear, and other
sources
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) in 1985 and 2005. The data is presented as percentages, highlighting the changes in
energy
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production over the two decades.
Overall
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, coal remained the dominant source in both 1985 and 2005. At the same time, other
sources
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consistently represented the smallest share in both years. In 1985, coal accounted for 29.80% of the total
energy
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production, the largest share. Gas was close behind at 29.63%, followed by
petro
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Petro
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with 29.27%. Nuclear power made up only 6%,
while
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other
sources
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contributed a mere 4%, making them the least significant. By 2005, the distribution had shifted slightly. Coal's share rose to 30.93%, and gas increased to 30.31%.
In contrast
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,
petro
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Petro
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experienced a decline, dropping to 19%,
while
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nuclear
energy
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saw a rise, reaching 10%. Despite still being the smallest category, other
sources
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also
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saw growth, increasing to 9%.
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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "while".
Vocabulary: Replace the words energy, sources with synonyms.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • proportion
  • percentage
  • increase
  • decrease
  • production
  • energy source
  • fossil fuels
  • renewable energy
  • non-renewable energy
  • comparison
  • major/minor changes
  • phased out
  • introduced
  • contribution
  • total energy output
  • environmental impact
  • economic impact
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