The pie charts show information about energy production in a country in two separate years. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and making comparisons where relevant.

The pie charts show information about energy production in a country in two separate years. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and making comparisons where relevant.
The two pie charts illustrate the distribution of
energy
production across five
sources
(coal, gas,
petro
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petrol
, nuclear, and other
sources
) in 1985 and 2005. The data is presented as percentages, highlighting the changes in
energy
production over the two decades.
Overall
, coal remained the dominant source in both 1985 and 2005. At the same time, other
sources
consistently represented the smallest share in both years. In 1985, coal accounted for 29.80% of the total
energy
production, the largest share. Gas was close behind at 29.63%, followed by
petro
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Petro
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with 29.27%. Nuclear power made up only 6%,
while
other
sources
contributed a mere 4%, making them the least significant. By 2005, the distribution had shifted slightly. Coal's share rose to 30.93%, and gas increased to 30.31%.
In contrast
,
petro
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Petro
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experienced a decline, dropping to 19%,
while
nuclear
energy
saw a rise, reaching 10%. Despite still being the smallest category, other
sources
also
saw growth, increasing to 9%.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words energy, sources with synonyms.

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • proportion
  • percentage
  • increase
  • decrease
  • production
  • energy source
  • fossil fuels
  • renewable energy
  • non-renewable energy
  • comparison
  • major/minor changes
  • phased out
  • introduced
  • contribution
  • total energy output
  • environmental impact
  • economic impact
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