You should spend about 20 minutes on this task. The table and charts below give information on the police budget for 2017 and 2018 in one area of Britain. The table shows where the money came from and the charts show how it was distributed. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. Write at least 150 words. You should spend about 20 minutes on this task. The table and charts below give information on the police budget for 2017 and 2018 in one area of Britain. The table shows where the money came from and the charts show how it was distributed. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. Write at least 150 words.
The table shows the total expenditure of the British corps, in millions of pounds sterling, sourced from
national
government, local taxes, and other sources between 2017 and 2018, Add an article
the national
while
the three pie charts illustrate the proportion of money
spent on salaries, technology, buildings and transport in the same years.
Overall
, the information provided shows an upward trend for the budget allocated from
the local government, local taxes, and other sources over the years. Change preposition
by
Similarly
, the amount of money
spent on technology has experienced a noticeable increase in 2017. In contrast
, the expenses on buildings and transport shows
a decline in the same year.
Between 2017 and 2018, the Change the verb form
show
money
allocated for the police needs shows an increase, the local government increased the support from 175.5m to 177.8m, the money
taken from local taxes was increased from 91.2m to 102.3m, and other sources are
from 38m to 38.5m.
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apply
Furthermore
, in 2018 the expenditure on salaries of the police remained steady which is 17%, while
the budget spent on technology showed a sharp increase from 8% to 14%. In contrast
, the allocation for buildings and transport decreased as
much as 6%.Change preposition
by as
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