Tourism today creates a variety of problems, such as pollution due to flights, traffic congestion and water pollution. Do you think that governments should impose extra taxes on flights or accommodation to restrict today's tourism industry?

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It has become a serious trend that expanding tourism contributes to various problems including pollution and traffic congestion. Some
people
demand higher
taxes
should be imposed on accommodation and
flights
by the government. I partially support
this
view, for the growing threat to the environment regardless of
taxes
restricting economic activities. On the one hand, higher
taxes
should be imposed on accommodation and
flights
since an increase in harmful gas emitted from
flights
destroys the environment at an accelerating speed.
In other words
, expanding tourism has made the Earth a more hostile place to live as
people
are more threatened by the sudden rise in
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global temperature.
For instance
, the amount of CO2 has increased by 10% since 2020 with the growing number of foreign tours around the world.
Thus
,
the
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harsher
restriction
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restrictions
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on hotels and
flights
is
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necessary to prevent
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further
damage to nature.
On the other hand
, the introduction of
taxes
has a negative consequence from an economic perspective since it discourages
people
from travelling abroad. Indeed, more
people
are reluctant to visit other nations by
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, leading to the
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of business. To illustrate
this
, the GDP declined by nearly 15% in Japan in 2004 with fewer foreign travellers who dropped money on hotels and
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shops.
Consequently
, the problems of poverty and higher unemployment have become more severe, making another increase in
taxes
unnecessary. In conclusion, I somewhat agree that extra
taxes
should be introduced to prevent the
further
environmental damage caused by the growing number of international tourists using
flights
.
However
, they can
also
limit national business, leading to
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stagnant economy
as well as
growing poverty.
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