The charts below show the proportion of British students at one university in England who were able to speak other languages in addition to English, in 2000 and 2010. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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other
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England
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Overall
, The most significant feature is the proportion of students only speaking spanish
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Spanish
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Germany
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German
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other languages
remained stable to
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, The number of studentss
who spoke French only shows dramatically decreased from 15% in 2000 to 10% in 2010. Correct your spelling
students
In contrast
, The score of no other languages
sharply increased in 2010 to 20%.
However
,in 2000 the strongest proportion was related to Spanich
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Spanish
while
Germany and two
other languages
received the weakest rate. In addition
, in 2010 exhibited similar
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Spanich
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Spanish
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