The table shows the proportion of people in England who agree with same-sex marriage from 1989 to 2013.. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The above table demonstrates the percentage of
people
with different or no religion who accepted the notion of same-sex marriage in England from the year 1989 to the year 2013.
Overall
, it's evident that the score in 1989 in the five different categories of people
is significantly deficient compared to 2013. Moreover
, it is noticeable that non-religious people
received the highest percentage in the whole period with 20 in 1989 ending with 77 in 2013.
In contrast
, the percentage of non-Christian people
contributed the weakest amount to 30 in 2013.However
, the number of Church shows dramatically grew from 9 in 1989 to 55 in 2013. While
it remains stable in 2001 and 2007 with 31. Moreover
, Roman people
's scores are sharply raised from 21 in 1989 to 61 in 2003. In addition
, other Christians and non-Christians exhibited a similar gradual increase pattern to be
54 and 30 in 2013.Unnecessary verb
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