The two maps below present an island, before and after the construction of some tourist facilities. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

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The maps above illustrate the changes

occurred

Correct pronoun usage

that occurred

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when a holiday resort was built on an

island

. Generally, the area transformed from a natural

island

to a built-up place for leisure activities.

Firstly

, transportation infrastructures have been extensively built across the

island

, with a pier built along the south shore for boat access and vehicle tracks have been constructed to connect the pier, restaurant and the reception in between and as surrounded by these tracks. Footpaths were set up across the

island

, connecting all the accommodations on both East and west of the reception,

as well as

the Beach on the west end, now designed as a swimming area for holidaymakers. Existing forests on the

island

were conserved after the construction of the resort, they are located on the east side of the

island

as well as

the one on the west side, currently surrounded by the accommodations.

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