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The two maps below present an island, before and after the construction of some tourist facilities. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The two maps below present an island, before and after the construction of some tourist facilities. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The maps above illustrate the changes
occurred
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that occurred
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 when a holiday resort was built on an
island
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. Generally, the area transformed from a natural
island
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 to a built-up place for leisure activities.
Firstly
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, transportation infrastructures have been extensively built across the
island
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, with a pier built along the south shore for boat access and vehicle tracks have been constructed to connect the pier, restaurant and the reception in between and as surrounded by these tracks. Footpaths were set up across the
island
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, connecting all the accommodations on both East and west of the reception,
as well as
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 the Beach on the west end, now designed as a swimming area for holidaymakers. Existing forests on the
island
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 were conserved after the construction of the resort, they are located on the east side of the
island
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,
as well as
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 the one on the west side, currently surrounded by the accommodations.
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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "as well as".
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Common mistake: Your writing should be 150-250 words.
Basic structure: Change the second paragraph.
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Basic structure: Change the fourth paragraph.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words island with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: Only 4 basic words for charts were used.
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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the second paragraph.
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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the fourth paragraph.
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