The diagram below shows the manufacturing process for making sugar from sugar cane. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The diagram below gives information about the steps for manufacturing

sugar

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process

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to make

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from

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canes

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. The

manufactoring

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manufacturing

process

is occurred

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in both

field

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for plantation and factory for

manufaction

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manufacture

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To begin

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with, it takes time for the growing span of

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canes

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, which takes about 12 to 18 months. When matured, they are harvested by

famers

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farmers

manually using a knife-like tool

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and are delivered to

factory

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by trucks. In the factory,

suar

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sugar

canes are crushed by machines and

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into juice. The

forth

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step is filtering from limestone in order to purify the juice. After the purification, the juice is heated in the evaporator and becomes syrup

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the high temperature. The syrup is

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filled in the centrifuge to separate

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crystals from the liquid.

Finally

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manufaturing

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manufacturing

step is drying and cooling the crystals, which become the finished goods,

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