The bar chart below shows the expenditure of two countries in consumer goods in 2010. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The chart compares the consumer goods expenditure of
France
and United
Kingdom in 2010.
Correct article usage
the United
Overall
it can be clearly observed that the expense
of Fix the agreement mistake
expenses
UK
Correct article usage
the UK
is
higher than Correct subject-verb agreement
are
France
, except computers
and Change preposition
for computers
perfume
that
the trends are different.
The Correct word choice
apply
UK
people spend the most money for
cars, books, Change preposition
on
computers
, cameras and perfume
respectively. However
, Frenchs use their
for cars, Correct pronoun usage
them
computers
, books,perfume
and cameras sucessively
. To compare the trend that in Correct your spelling
successively
UK
and France
consume cars the most. While
the second goods
is different, Fix the agreement mistake
good
UK
people buy computers
more than Frenchs
. Even though cameras Correct your spelling
French
very
popular in Add a missing verb
are very
UK
, Correct article usage
the UK
but
it is the least popular in Correct word choice
apply
France
. The least consuming
good in Wrong verb form
consumed
UK
is the perfume
surprisingly.Submitted by juneyjelly58 on
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Sentences: Add more complex sentences.
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Common mistake: Your writing should be 150-250 words.
Vocabulary: Replace the words france, uk, computers, perfume with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: Only 3 basic words for charts were used.
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Vocabulary: The word "compares" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "trends" was used 2 times.
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