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The graph below gives information from a 2008 report about consumption of energy in the USA since 1980 with projections until 2030. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and making comparisons where relevant.

The graph below gives information from a 2008 report about consumption of energy in the USA since 1980 with projections until 2030. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and making comparisons where relevant.
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The given graph provides data on
energy
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usage
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 in the USA since 1980 with predictions for 2030.
Overall
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, there was an upward trend in the
consumption
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 of all
energy
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 sources, except hydropower.
It is clear that
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 fossil fuels were, are and will be used more than renewable sources,
while
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 the
consumption
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 of nuclear, solar/wind and hydropower is projected to increase in the future.
In addition
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, petrol and oil are the most in-demand sources. The
consumption
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 of petrol and oil was equal to exactly 35
quadrillion
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units
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 in 1980,
however
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 after some slight drops and moderate growth during the period of 50 years, its
usage
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 will constitute approximately 50
quadrillion
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units
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 in 2030.
Although
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 natural gas was more popular rather than coal in the beginning, the forecast shows that coal
consumption
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 will surpass natural gas in the future as the
usage
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 of these types of
energy
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 will be nearly 30
quadrillion
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units
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 and below 25
quadrillion
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units
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 respectively.
Also
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, types of renewable
energy
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 are predicted to become more widely used in the future than they were in the past.
Consumption
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 of all these types of
energy
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 was about 3
quadrillion
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units
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 in 1980 but after some ups and downs, nuclear
energy
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usage
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 will be above 5
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quadrillion
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quadrillions
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, solar and wind will make up almost 5
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quadrillion
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quadrillions
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, meanwhile, hydropower is expected to have a minimal decline of 1
quadrillion
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 unit
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Vocabulary: Replace the words energy, usage, consumption, quadrillion, units with synonyms.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • energy consumption
  • projections
  • renewable energy
  • non-renewable resources
  • sustainable
  • fossil fuels
  • nuclear energy
  • biofuels
  • hydroelectric power
  • solar energy
  • wind energy
  • trends
  • increases/decreases
  • shifts
  • milestones
  • significant
  • forecast
  • implications
  • sustainable development
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