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The table provides information the reasons of people using the car in city, and the pie chart shows the percentage of transport namely car, LRT(Light Rail Transit), bus and taxi.

The table provides information the reasons of people using the car in city, and the pie chart shows the percentage of transport namely car, LRT(Light Rail Transit), bus and taxi.
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The table provides data on reasons for
car
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use
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 in cities,
while
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 the pie chart displays the distribution of transport modes:
cars
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, Light Rail Transit (LRT), buses, and taxis. The pie chart reveals that 45% of commuters
use
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cars
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, followed by LRT at 35%. Both buses and taxis account for 10% each.
Car
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 usage has shown an upward trend, surging over time, as more people rely on its convenience.
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, LRT usage may drop in the future
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 the growing popularity of
cars
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. Bus and taxi
use
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, though steady at present, could plunge if
car
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 ownership continues to rise. The table suggests that comfort and flexibility are key reasons people choose
cars
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. If these preferences persist,
car
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use
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 could double or even triple, leading to a
further
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 dip in public transport
use
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. In conclusion,
car
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use
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 continues to increase, which might cause other modes of transport to show a downward trend.

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Vocabulary: Replace the words car, use, cars with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "provides" in your introduction.
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Vocabulary: The word "chart" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "table" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "trend" was used 2 times.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • urban mobility
  • societal inclination
  • personal space
  • scheduling freedom
  • cost-efficiency
  • public transport systems
  • convenience
  • time-efficiency
  • environmental considerations
  • sustainable urban planning
  • mobility challenges
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