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The Chart below shows the number of household in US by their annual income in 2007, 2011 and 2015. summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant

The Chart below shows the number of household in US by their annual income in 2007, 2011 and 2015. summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant
#household #income #summarise #information #features #comparisons
The given information on the
depics
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depicts
 represents the numeracy of
househols
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households
household
 in
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the Us
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Us
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US
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 with their annual salary in 2007, 2011,
2015
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and 2015
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.
Overall
, there
is
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was
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 mostly a dramatic boom in 2007 and 2015 where
household
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households
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 for
a
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apply
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less than $25,000 are almost thirty and
nealy
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nearly
thirty five
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thirty-five
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. For each represented year the houses for $75,000-$99,999 or more slightly in the same
peack
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peak
pack
 is fifteen. The
lasts
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last
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 sections $50,000-$74,999 just over twenty and $25,000-$49,999 for
first
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the first
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 and
last
year
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years
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aproximatly
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approximately
twenty five
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twenty-five
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,
however
 for
the
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apply
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2011 it was reached a
peack
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peak
 for
this
 year
is
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it
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 thirty.
To conclude
, giving us information
do
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does
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 not have
a dramatical changes
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a dramatical change
dramatical changes
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. For
instanse
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instance
, stood at the
lagest
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lowest
 income
was
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apply
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in 2015
ande
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and
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 the lowest in 2011. We can see that during
this
 time the
numbers
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number
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 of
household
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households
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increase
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increased
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 for all provided sections.
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Introduction: The introduction is missing.
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Conclusion: The conclusion is too long.
Introduction: The chart intro is missing.
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Common mistake: Your writing should be 150-250 words.
Introduction: The chart intro is missing.
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Vocabulary: The word "represents" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "information" was used 2 times.
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