The diagram below shows how instant noodles are manufactured. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparions where relecant.

The figure illustrates the manufacturing process of instant noodles. There are eight stages in the process, beginning with the production of

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from the mixture of flour, water, and oil. The

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is

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shaped into discs before they are

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fried and packed into cups with the condiments

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and

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and sealed to be distributed to the market.

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, flour is stored in storage silos before it is delivered to the mixer, in which it is being mixed with oil and water to create

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. The

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is

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put on a roller

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sheets. The next steps involve a

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that cuts the

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sheets into strips

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before they are shaped into noodle discs.

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transferring the noodle discs to a drying

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to cook them using oil. The dried noodles are

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put into cups with vegetables and spices.

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, they are passed to the labelling

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, followed by the sealing process and

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ready to be distributed to the market.