The map below shows the changes that have taken place in Meadowside village and Fronton, a neighboring town, since 1962. Report the main features and make comparisions if relevant.
The provided map illustrates the changes that have been made in Meadowside Village,and a nearby town called Fonton . since the year 1962 .
Overall
, It is clearly seen that the two mentioned places were in shortage of infrastructural facilities .
In comparison to the current year , changes have been made to unite the town and the village . Also
, fundamental changes such
as railways have taken place .
To start with , In 1962 Fonton and Meadowside Village were two separate places . Then
in 1985 , railways were structured to connect them together .In addition
, a leisure complex , a housing estate and a superstore were established next to the railway in the same year .
Furthermore
, in the current day , they have become one unit . Moreover
, many new buildings were constructed such
as the hotel and the business park . Also
, a station was built next to the main railway.Submitted by hindgadeem123 on
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