The bar chart shows the percentage of adult male smokers in seven countries along with the world average in 2000 and 2015. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant. Write at least 150 words.

The bar chart shows the percentage of adult male smokers in seven countries along with the world average in 2000 and 2015.

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

Write at least 150 words.
The bar chart delineates the population of XY chromosomes-gender who smokes, based in 7 different countries of varied continents,
as well as
the percentage of worldwide male smokers during the years 2005 and 2015.
Overall
, a significant note that has emerged is that the world population of male smokers charted slightly above 40% in 2005, followed by a decrease to a fraction of approximately 32% in 2015. Right off the bat, it can be witnessed that Armenia recorded a pinnacle of around 7/10 lads who smoked in 2005, followed by a minute decline to around 5/10 in 2015.
Thereafter
, Egypt and Lebanon witnessed a levelled tabulation of a close 4/10 mentioned individuals smoking in 2005 and
subsequently
rising in 2015 (68% and 49% respectively).
Following
this
, Bangladesh saw a peak in 2005 with a record of three-tenth of its male population inhaling smoke,
then
the number reduced to a low of two-fifths in 2015.
Furthermore
, Cuba has been constant throughout the decade with the fraction of cigarette users being just above 60% in 2005 and 2015.
Finally
, Mexico and Australia observed a seemingly similar pattern in its reduction (15% abatement throughout the 10-year period).
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Conclusion: The conclusion is too long.
Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "percentage" in your introduction.
Vocabulary: The word "around" was used 2 times.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • bar chart, percentage, adult male smokers
  • world average, increased, decreased
  • tobacco consumption, lung cancer
  • public health, awareness campaigns
  • government policy, smoking bans
  • health risks, nicotine, tobacco industry
  • chart analysis, data comparison
  • statistical trend, significant fluctuation
  • stagnation, steady rise, moderate fall
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