The maps below show an industrial area in town of Norbiton and planned future development of the site. Summarise information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
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The maps compare the current industrial estate of Norbiton and future development for the area.
Overall
, the area used by industrial facilities will be transformed into residential
state. Meanwhile, in Correct article usage
a residential
future
factories will be transformed into Correct article usage
the future
residental
areas and other facilities.
On the one hand, Correct your spelling
residential
it is clear that
future development holds functional changes. The factories in the current situation will be converted into housing for people. In addition
, shops will be constructed on the west of the ring road followed by marginal schools on the east side. Meanwhile, on the site, many factories and other facilities consist of residential areas.
On the other hand
, a bridge will be constructed over the river following a new path from the
Viny road. In addition
, housing will be expanded and it will be built across the river. In contrast
, Farmland will be replaced by residential and it will be shifted just beside the new housing space.Submitted by cranjal07 on
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