The line graph shows the percentages of Australian export with four countries. The graph below shows the percentage of Australian exports to 4 countries from 1990 to 2012

The line graph shows the percentages of Australian export with four countries.

The graph below shows the percentage of Australian exports to 4 countries from 1990 to 2012
The linear graph illustrates the proportion of trade made by Australia to four different countries between 1990 and 2012.
Overall
, it was adequate that China had the highest percentage of
exports
. Meanwhile, there
was
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some fluctuations in
exports
made by the US. On the one hand, it was clearly apparent that China had the highest rate of
exports
with a massive increment in the end.
Similarly
, at the beginning of 1990, China had just nearly 3% of
exports
however
it reached the top chart with 30% in 2012. Meanwhile, Japan started with the highest
exports
in 1990 with around 27%.
However
, Japan faced a slight decline and reached about 18% in 2012.
On the other hand
, the US had some fluctuations over the period where the trade started at 12% in 1990 and decreased to 8% in 1995.
However
, in the next 5
year
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, it again increased and reached approximately 12% and fell to nearly 7% in 2012.
In contrast
, India started with the lowest
exports
among the four countries and ended with the lowest
exports
reaching about 2% in 1990 and 6% in 2012.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words exports with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "reached" was used 3 times.
Vocabulary: The word "fluctuations" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "nearly" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "about" was used 2 times.

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • Line graph
  • Percentage
  • Exports
  • Trend analysis
  • Upward/downward trend
  • Fluctuation
  • Comparison
  • Peak performance
  • Decline
  • Stability
  • Significant
  • Inferred
  • Global events
  • Economic context
  • Reflect
  • Influence
  • Patterns
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