The bar chart below shows the percentage of unemployed graduates, aged 20-24, in one European country over a two-year period. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and making comparisons where relevant

The bar chart illustrates the proportion of graduates who do not have a job between 20 to 24 , in one European country in separate eight

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from 2088 to 2009. At first glance, it is obvious the total unemployment of graduates increased during these two years.

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men's percentage started by 10 per cent in Jan 08. It had a slight fall in seven

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, in October of 2008, the percentage reached around 17 per cent which means they had a sharp increase in only 3 calendar

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. Later, in the next year, the number of boys who were unemployed

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approximately 23 per cent.

second,

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the women who always did a job in 2088 and 2009 were more than men. Statistically, in all 8

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, the proportion of girls was under half of men except in July of 2009.

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, all the changes for both genders were the same. Clearly, in the first statistics they faced with drop

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the chart saw more unemployment until the

last

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month of the chart.