The chart shows the different levels of post-school qualifications in Australia and the proportion of men amd women who held them in 1999. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The supplied bar chart illustrates how many Australian
post-school
qualified in
various rates and Change preposition
at
also
the percentage of men
and women
who organised them in 1999.
A glance at the graph reveals that the highest number of post-school
qualification
is for Fix the agreement mistake
qualifications
men
in
skilled vocational Change preposition
with
diploma
. Fix the agreement mistake
diplomas
However
, women
did not qualified
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qualify
in
Change preposition
for
skilled
vocational Add an article
the skilled
diploma
as much as Fix the agreement mistake
diplomas
other
parts Change preposition
in other
in
Change preposition
of
Australia
over the period.
In 1999, the proportion of qualifications for skilled vocational diploma
for Fix the agreement mistake
diplomas
men
was considerably more than women
in the same Change preposition
for women
post-school
qualifications in Australia
at 90% and 10%, respectively. ( which were the highest and lowest amount of post-school
qualifications over the whole year).
Furthermore
, the proportion of qualified post-school
for men
bachelor's degree
was a bit as much as Fix the agreement mistake
degrees
women
in Australia
at 45% and 50%, respectively. Moreover
, the number of women
in
undergraduate Change preposition
with
diploma
was 70% which was twice more than Fix the agreement mistake
diplomas
men
in the same group that
was 35% in Correct pronoun usage
apply
Australia
in 1999.Submitted by TUTOO on
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Vocabulary: Replace the words post-school, men, women, diploma, australia with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "number of" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "proportion" was used 2 times.
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