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The bar chart below shows the number of hours worked per week by industrial workers in four European countries (France, Sweden, Denmark, and Finland) in 2010. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The bar chart below shows the number of hours worked per week by industrial workers in four European countries (France, Sweden, Denmark, and Finland) in 2010. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The bar chart provides information about the average number of
hours
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 worked per
week
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 by industrial
workers
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 in four European countries—France,
Sweden
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,
Denmark
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, and
Finland
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—in the year 2010.
Overall
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,
workers
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 in France and
Sweden
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 worked significantly more
hours
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 per
week
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 than those in
Denmark
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 and
Finland
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. France had the highest average working
hours
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,
while
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Finland
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 recorded the lowest. In 2010, French industrial
workers
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 had the longest workweek, averaging 40
hours
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 per
week
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.
Sweden
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 followed closely with an average of just under 38
hours
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.
In contrast
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,
workers
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 in
Denmark
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 and
Finland
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 worked fewer
hours
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, with the weekly averages standing at approximately 35 and 32
hours
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, respectively. Notably,
Finland
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 had the lowest figure among the four countries. The differences between the countries are quite distinct. French
workers
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 averaged 8
hours
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 more per
week
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 than their Finnish counterparts, which reflects a considerable difference in working culture.
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, the gap between
Denmark
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 and
Sweden
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 was smaller, at around 3
hours
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.
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Vocabulary: Rephrase your introduction. Words match: 81%.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words hours, week, workers, sweden, denmark, finland with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "differences" was used 2 times.
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