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The chart shows the number of international students studying at a UK university between 1995 and 2015. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

The chart shows the number of international students studying at a UK university between 1995 and 2015. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
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The diagram displays the
number
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 of international
students
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 from four different continents (Asia, Africa, Europe and North America) at a university in the UK during a time period of 20 years, between 1995 and 2015.
While
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 African
students
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 accounted for the least international
students
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,
students
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 from Asia showed the highest
number
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 during the period. Over the time of 20 years, there was a doubling of people from Asia studying in the UK, reaching a
number
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 of 120
students
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 in the year 2015. The proportion of European
students
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 was consistent from 1995 to 2005, accounting for over 50
students
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.  African
students
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 accounted for the least
number
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 of
students
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 from abroad. The
number
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 of Africans studying in the UK
were
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stable at around 20
students
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 until the year 2005,
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 rose to a peak of 30
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 in 2010, but
then
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 fell again to 20
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 in 2015. North American people accounted for around 40
students
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 until the year 2010 and showed
then
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 a steep increase up to a quantity of 70
students
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 in 2015, even more than Europeans.
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