The chart shows the number of international students studying at a UK university between 1995 and 2015. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
The diagram displays the
number
of international students
from four different continents (Asia, Africa, Europe and North America) at a university in the UK during a time period of 20 years, between 1995 and 2015. While
African students
accounted for the least international students
, students
from Asia showed the highest number
during the period.
Over the time of 20 years, there was a doubling of people from Asia studying in the UK, reaching a number
of 120 students
in the year 2015. The proportion of European students
was consistent from 1995 to 2005, accounting for over 50 students
.
African students
accounted for the least number
of students
from abroad. The number
of Africans studying in the UK were
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was
were
stable at around 20 Remove the redundancy
apply
students
until the year 2005, then
rose to a peak of 30 students
in 2010, but then
fell again to 20 students
in 2015. North American people accounted for around 40 students
until the year 2010 and showed then
a steep increase up to a quantity of 70 students
in 2015, even more than Europeans.Submitted by nadja_stenz on
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