The graph below gives information about the percentage of the population in four Asian countries living in cities form 1970 to 2020, with predictions for 2030 and 2040. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The line graph gives data on the percentage of
population
living in Add an article
the population
cities
in the period of 50 years, particularly from 1970 to 2020 with projection
for 2030 and 2040 in 4 different states of Asia, namely Fix the agreement mistake
projections
Philippines
, Malaysia and Thailand, Correct article usage
the Philippines
as well as
Indonesia.
Overall
, the ratio of dwellers living in cities
rather than rural areas grew in all 4 countries. Moreover
, the percentage in 3 countries experienced only an upward trend, meanwhile in Phillippiness amount of people suddenly decreased in middle
years despite increasing in Correct article usage
the middle
a
total number in the end. Correct article usage
the
In addition
, the maximum of the projection is expected in Malaysia, while
the minimum will be in Thailand.
Just below 10% of local people preferred to live in big cities
of
Indonesia in 1970, Change preposition
in
furthermore
, it is the lowest result in the provided picture. However
, after a gradual increase over the years, predictions for 2040 show that about 60% of population
will live in various Add an article
the population
cities
there. Approximately 20% of the population of Thailand chose city
lifestyle over the rural one in 1970 but after a noticeable Correct article usage
the city
rise
their number is going to be equal to almost 45%.
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rise,
Altough
, in comparison with other countries more than 30% of Correct your spelling
Although
Philippines'
society was living in Correct article usage
the Philippines'
cities
, their amount is not projected to change a lot as the ratio is forecasted to constitute around 50%. A sharp surge was seen in Malaysia where the indicator was equal to exactly 30% but is waited
to peak at nearly 90% in 2040.Wrong verb form
waiting
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