The graph below gives information from a 2008 report about consumption of energy in the USA since 1980 with projections until 2030. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
the higher than other
chart
provided data on the energy
consumed in the perıod five years from 2008 to 2030 respectively , petrol
and oil
, coal , natural gas,nuclear,solar/wind and hydropower
.
Firstly
, the chart
depicts
that before 2008 , the number of Verb problem
shows
petrol
and oil
was one of the top , the second place shows coal and natural gas ,which same consumed . At the same time , Amout of nuclear and solar /wind and hydropower
,which was very little different between them , that known as green energy
,which the
Correct article usage
a
total
Correct subject-verb agreement
totals
approximately
10 Change preposition
of approximately
quadrianlion
unıt.
Correct your spelling
quadrillion
Secondly
, the chart
information show
after 2008 , when the number of Correct subject-verb agreement
shows
petrol
and oil
will
consumptionVerb problem
apply
Add a missing verb
is
energy
sources , coal and natural gas will increase between them and coal will be the winner. An
amount of nuclear and solar/wind Correct article usage
The
energy
sources according to
the chart
will be increasing a little bit . The
Correct article usage
Hydropower
hydropower
will same consumed between 2008 to 2030 .
Meanwhile , the chart
below gives information from 1980 to future predictions for 2030 .The biggest consumption has been petrol
and oil
, at the same time , the lowest have
been Change the verb form
has
hydropower
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