The graph below gives information from a 2008 report about consumption of energy in the USA since 1980 with projections until 2030. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The graph below gives information from a 2008 report about consumption of energy in the USA since 1980 with projections until 2030.

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
the
chart
provided data on the
energy
consumed in the perıod five years from 2008 to 2030 respectively ,
petrol
and
oil
, coal , natural gas,nuclear,solar/wind and
hydropower
.
Firstly
, the
chart
depicts
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shows
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that before 2008 , the number of
petrol
and
oil
was one of the top , the second place shows coal and natural gas ,which same consumed . At the same time , Amout of nuclear and solar /wind and
hydropower
,which was very little different between them , that known as green
energy
,which
the
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a
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total
Correct subject-verb agreement
totals
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approximately
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of approximately
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10
quadrianlion
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quadrillion
unıt.
Secondly
, the
chart
information
show
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shows
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after 2008 , when the number of
petrol
and
oil
will
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apply
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consumption
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is
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higher than other
energy
sources , coal and natural gas will increase between them and coal will be the winner.
An
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The
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amount of nuclear and solar/wind
energy
sources
according to
the
chart
will be increasing a little bit .
The
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Hydropower
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hydropower
will same consumed between 2008 to 2030 . Meanwhile , the
chart
below gives information from 1980 to future predictions for 2030 .The biggest consumption has been
petrol
and
oil
, at the same time , the lowest
have
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has
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been
hydropower
.
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Sentences: Add more complex sentences.
Vocabulary: Replace the words chart, energy, petrol, oil, hydropower with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "chart" was used 5 times.
Vocabulary: The word "shows" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "information" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "number of" was used 2 times.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • energy consumption
  • projections
  • renewable energy
  • non-renewable resources
  • sustainable
  • fossil fuels
  • nuclear energy
  • biofuels
  • hydroelectric power
  • solar energy
  • wind energy
  • trends
  • increases/decreases
  • shifts
  • milestones
  • significant
  • forecast
  • implications
  • sustainable development
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