The chart below shows the percentage of households owning four types of electronic devices between 1995 and 2015. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. (line graph)

The chart below shows the percentage of households owning four types of electronic devices between 1995 and 2015. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. (line graph)
The line graph compared the proportion of families owning MP3 players, Mobile phones, Computers and Tablet devices over a period of 20 years.
Overall
, it is noticeable all percentages are increasing over the same time span. Meanwhile, Mobile phones rose significantly and reached approximately 100, which is almost complementary.
According to
what is shown, Mobile phones and Computers started at the same percentage 9%
then
they increased steadily to 70 per cent and 60 per cent before 2005 respectively,
after
this
, each one had
a specific steady steps
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until they catch to almost 100 together.
On the other hand
, MP3 had a simple increase starting under 20% to achieve above 40 in 2015,
while
tablets began at zeros and
then
had a large increase between 2005 to 2010 to get to over 80%.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • line chart
  • ownership percentages
  • electronic devices
  • 20-year period
  • significant increases
  • significant decreases
  • detailed comparison
  • highest ownership rates
  • dramatic changes
  • potential reasons
  • trends
  • shifts
  • insights
  • implications
  • future device ownership patterns
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