The line chart below illustrates the change in shop closures and openings from 2011 to 2018, in a particular country.

The line chart below illustrates the change in shop closures and openings from 2011 to 2018, in a particular country.
The line graph shows the number of
shop
closures
and
openings
in a specific country from 2011 to 2018.
Overall
, the trends for
both
shop
closures
and
openings
fluctuated significantly during
this
period, with
closures
generally being higher than
openings
, except in a few years. In 2011,
shop
closures
stood at around 6,500,
while
openings
were lower at approximately 8,500.
Both
figures saw a drop in 2012, with
closures
falling to around 6,000 and
openings
plummeting to 4,000. By 2014,
closures
surged to their peak at 7,000,
whereas
openings
showed a gradual increase, reaching around 6,000 in the same year. The most notable change occurred in 2015 when
closures
dipped sharply to a low of 500,
while
openings
remained steady at 4,000.
Following
this
,
both
figures rose again in 2016, with
closures
increasing dramatically to 5,000 and
openings
slightly rising. In the final two years,
both
openings
and
closures
remained relatively stable, with
closures
around 5,000 and
openings
consistently lower at around 3,000. In summary, the data reflects a fluctuating pattern in
shop
openings
and
closures
, with
closures
typically exceeding
openings
, except in 2015.
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Sentences: Add more complex sentences.
Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "while".
Vocabulary: Replace the words shop, closures, openings, both with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "figures" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "figures" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "shows" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "remained" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "around" was used 5 times.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • fluctuation
  • trend
  • peak
  • trough
  • stability
  • significant change
  • economic impact
  • recession
  • policy influence
  • sector-specific
  • consumer behavior
  • online shopping
  • geographical distribution
  • notable increase/decrease
  • period of stability
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