this process diagram shows how glass containers are made. The steps of the process are numbered 1 to 9.

this process diagram shows how glass containers are made. The steps of the process are numbered 1 to 9.
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The given illustration describes the
proces
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process
of making
shaping
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and shaping
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glass
containers.
Overall
the process contains nine steps to
complet
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complete
the whole process starting with
melt
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melting
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the glasses until
pack
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packing
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the
glass
containers. The process
begin
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begins
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with melting the
glass
on
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in
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a furnace at
105 celsius
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105-celsius
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degree
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degrees
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until it
become
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becomes
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felxible
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flexible
.
Next,
the hot
glass
brings
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was brought
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to
first
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the first
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mould to
pressed
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be pressed
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and printed. The
glass
press until
fill
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apply
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the space in the first mould. After that, the
glass
bring
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is brought
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to the second mould to make the structure like a
gass
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gas
container.
Then
blow the air into the
glass
so that it
make
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a perfect structure.
Following
this
, the
glass
container brings to the kiln to warm up
on
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at
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482
celsius
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Celsius
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degree
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degrees
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.
Next,
the
glass
container cooled at 25
celsius
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Celsius
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degree for 60 minutes. After that, the
glass
get
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gets
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check
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checked
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in
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by
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quality control to
separe
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separate
the
fail
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failed
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products.
Last
, the
glass
containers which passed the quality control can
be distributes
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be distributed
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to
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the customer
a customer
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customer
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customers
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while
the imperfect products go to
the
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apply
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waste.
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