The table and charts below give information on the police budget for 2017 and 2018 in one area of Britain. The table shows where the money came from and the charts show how it was distributed. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant
The table and pie chart show the police
budget
over two years between 2017 and 2018 in a particular area in Britain. While
the table explains the source of the money, the pie chart gives information about the budget
allocation.
Based on the table, the value of money the police get
increased by 13,9 Wrong verb form
got
million
in 2018, in which National
Government contributed more than Correct article usage
the National
a
half of it in both years. Correct article usage
apply
On the other hand
, the value from local taxes increased steadily from 91.2 million
to 102.3 million
, while
other sources such
grants
witnessed a slight growth Change preposition
as grants
by
0.5 Change preposition
of
million
in 2018.
In terms of the budget
allocation, a significant major
of it was allocated for the officers and staff salaries, but the proportion experienced a significant drop, accounting Correct your spelling
majority
for
75% in 2017 to 69% in 2018. Change preposition
from
Whereas
the proportion for buildings and transport remained the same at 17%, the budget
distributed for technology rose by 6% in 2018.Submitted by averinasandra on
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