The tаblе and charts below give information on the police budget for 2017 and 2018 in оnе аrеа of Britain. The tаblе shows where the mоnеу саtе from and the charts show how it was distributed.  Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The tаblе and charts below give information on the police budget for 2017 and 2018 in оnе аrеа of Britain. The tаblе shows where the mоnеу саtе from and the charts show how it was distributed. 

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The table illustrates the data on the police budget, showing where the
money
came from, and the two pie charts describe the distribution of the amount of
money
in the two
of
Change preposition
apply
show examples
year
Fix the agreement mistake
years
show examples
2017 and 2018 in an area of Britain.
Overall
, there was an upward trend in all three sources,
while
money
spent on salaries was always the majority of contribution. Looking into more detail, the highest amount of
money
in the police budget belonged to the 'National Government', 175.5 million pounds in 2017, and it kept rising to 177.8 million pounds.
This
was followed by 'Local Taxes', at 91.2
millionpounds
Correct your spelling
million pounds
in 2017; after one year, it increased significantly to 102.3 million pounds. In terms of how the
money
was spent, the majority of the police budget went to salaries which was for officers and staff, dropping slightly from 75% in 2017 to 69% in 2018. Meanwhile, the proportion of 'Buildings and transport' remained constant, at 17% each year. An opposite pattern can be seen in the category of technology; its figure rose sharply from 8% in 2017 to 14% in 2018, which was the lowest rate during the given period.
Submitted by bizhanalikhan6 on

Unauthorized use and/or duplication of this material without express and written permission from this site’s author and/or owner is strictly prohibited. Excerpts and links may be used, provided that full and clear credit is given to Writing9 with appropriate and specific direction to the original content.

Vocabulary: Replace the words money with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "amount" was used 2 times.

You are not ready for IELTS Speaking, if you

  • Can’t speak smoothly without pauses.
  • Use simple words and lack vocabulary.
  • Feel nervous and anxious when speaking.
What to do next:
Look at other essays:

Essentional vocabulary list for IELTS Writing 7+

Learn how to write high-scoring essays with powerful words.
Download Free PDF and start improving you writing skills today!