There is no denying the fact that there are advantages and disadvantages to moving to another area with your
children
.
While
it is a commonly held belief that it is beneficial to take your
children
to another
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with you, there is
also
an argument that your
children
will not be happy with your move for many reasons. In
this
essay, I will discuss both points of view and express my opinion.
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hand, the
children
's
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may
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benefit from
this
move.
In other words
, the
children
may want to see
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cultures and study them.
In addition
, the
children
have a nature that
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them want to know everything and meet new people.
For example
, my young brother
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9 years old, he always wants to go with me when I want to go with my friends, he keeps saying I want to talk and have fun with them like you.
On the other hand
, many
children
have great memories in one place they can not leave
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. It is
also
possible to say that
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number of
children
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depressed because they
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to another country, they left their friends and they
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it hard to meet new people.
Moreover
, moving to another city may affect their personality.
For instance
,
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found that 65% of
children
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their home town
due to
their
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work,
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will not build their character easily and they will
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no opinion like a robot.
In conclusion, there are no easy answers to
this
question. On balance,
however
, I tend to believe that changing your city will have
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influence
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your
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character and
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they will get depressed because of that.