The chart below gives information on the percentage of British people giving money to charity by age range for the years 1990 and 2010. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
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The bar chart illustrates the amount of money that people in the UK
donating
to charity by different Wrong verb form
donated
age
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range
in Correct subject-verb agreement
ranges
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the year
year
1990 and 2010.The data is presented in percentages.
Fix the agreement mistake
years
Overall
,it can be seen that the majority of donations came from people Linking Words
in
working Change preposition
of
age
and the minority came from teenagers.
In 1990,The proportion of money Use synonyms
giving
to charity increased steadily from Wrong verb form
given
age
18-50 until reached Use synonyms
the
peak at Change the word
its
age
36-50 which was around 42%.After Use synonyms
that
the percentage dropped to 35% at Add a comma
that,
age
51-65 and decreased to just above 30% Use synonyms
at
Change preposition
in
Use synonyms
age
group >65.
In 2010,The percentage of money followed the same pattern as Correct article usage
the age
year
1990,which Change the article
the year
was
increased continuously from Unnecessary verb
apply
age
18 until peaking at Use synonyms
age
51-65 occupying 41%.Use synonyms
Linking Words
Lastly
the proportion Add a comma
Lastly,
in
people at Change preposition
of
age
>65 slightly dropped to 35%.Use synonyms
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