The charts below show the percentages of men and women aged 60-64 in employment in four countries in 1970 and 2000. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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the chart shows the average between the males and females working in four countries between 60-64 years in the time from 1790-2000, the
percentage
shown higher in 1970 compared to the percentage
in 2000 in all counties
in 1970 the percentage
started low at 73% in the USA while
got the maximum percentage
in Japan with 84% , therefore
the percentage
was 74% in Australia and 79% in Beigium
.so the peak was in Japan at 84% Correct your spelling
Belgium
while
the lowest point was in the USA with 73%.
in 2000 the percentage
dramatically changed the peak still in Japan at 76% while
the low point changed to Belgium with only 19%, and the rest of the four countries like Australia came with 47% and the USA at 55%
Overall
, beyond a shadow of a doubt
the average of men's and women's employment Add a comma
doubt,
is
changed and got lower in 2000 compared with the average in 1970.Unnecessary verb
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