The table below gives information about the amount of tax collected (as % of GDP) in five countries for 4 years between 1975 and 2005 Summarise the data and write at least 150 words
The table illustrates
detailed
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the detailed
amount
of tax
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compared
gdp
of each country during the 30 years from 1975 to Correct your spelling
GDP
the
2005.
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This
graph illustrates the rise and falls
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fall
compare
to the Change the form of the verb
compared
amount
of tax
in five countries starting with USA
, Korea, Japan, Turkey and ending with Sweden. The graph mostly rose Correct article usage
the USA
however
there were some exceptions for example
In Turkey which was in 1985.
In 1975 in sweden
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Sweden
tax
was 46% and after Correct article usage
the tax
decade
it Correct article usage
a decade
growth
and had become 47% and in 1995 the indicator of the Replace the word
grew
tax
showed 51% finaly
in Correct your spelling
finally
the
2005 the Change the article
apply
amount
of tax
consisted 70.1
%.
In Change preposition
of 70.1
USA
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the USA
tax
was 25.1% in 1975 after ten years it had increased to the 25.4% in 1975 it
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its
growth
to the level
of 27.1% in
the end in 2005 it was 27.4%.
In Korea Change the preposition
at
tax
was in
1975 15.1% Change preposition
apply
however
in 1985 it growth
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grew
intensivly
and had become 27% in spite of that in 1995 the Correct your spelling
intensively
tax
decreased to the level
of
26% in 2005 the amount
of tax
had become 27.3%.
Japan started in 1975 the tax
with 15% and this
slightly growth
to
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in
the
1985 Change the article
apply
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increased
incresed
to the Verb problem
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level
of 16% despite
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that
in 1985 the Correct pronoun usage
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tax
increased incredibly to the level
of 23% and by the end in
2005 it had Change preposition
of
become
32.1%
In Turkey Verb problem
reached
tax
was 16.4% in 1975, during
the next ten years Correct word choice
and during
iun
1985 it decreased to the Correct your spelling
in
amount
of 15% despite that in 1995 the tax
growth
to the Replace the word
grew
level
of 24% in
the end in 2005 it Change the preposition
at
ends
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ended
with
27.4%.Change preposition
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