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WThe line graph below shows changes in the amount of coffee exported from three countries between 2002 and 2012. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

WThe line graph below shows changes in the amount of coffee exported from three countries between 2002 and 2012. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The provided line graph gives information about the number of coffee exports, and three particular countries, namely
Columbia
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, Brazil and
Costa
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Rica
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 from 2002 to 2012.
Overall
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, it can be seen that Brazil was the highest exported country of beans followed by
Costa
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Rica
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.
However
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,
Columbia
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 was the lowest among them.
In addition
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, both
Costa
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Rica
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 and
Columbia
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 had a fluctuation over the period of time.
To begin
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 with, the amount of exported beans in Brazil was about 12 million kilograms in 2002. 2010 witnessed a gradual decrease with approximately 13,000,000 kilograms.
Moreover
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, The amount rose significantly and reached its peak in 2012 with 25,000,000
kg
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.
Costa
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Rica
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 recorded 15,000,000
kg
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 in 2002.
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, it experienced a drop in 2006 to almost 3,000,000
kg
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. From 2008 to 2010 the amount of exports increased dramatically to 20,000,000
kg
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.
On the other hand
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,
Columbia
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 recorded the lowest exported country over the period of time. It was 5 million in the initial year. The number rose from 2004 to 2006 but it had a magnificent decline in 2008 and hit a rocket bottom.
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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "however".
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Vocabulary: Replace the words columbia, costa, rica, kg with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "amount" was used 3 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "about" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the second paragraph.
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