The three pie charts compare the composition of four different meals, namely breakfast, dinner, lunch and snacks, in terms of three nutrients, namely sodium, saturated fat and added sugar.
The pie charts
shows
information about how Change the verb form
show
camparing
the four Correct your spelling
comparing
type
of food Fix the agreement mistake
types
that
namely breakfast, dinner , lunch , and Correct pronoun usage
apply
snacks
in addition
three
different nutrients that include Change preposition
to three
sodium
,saturated fat and extra sugar
.
Overall
, according to
what is shown the highest number of
Correct quantifier usage
apply
percentage
was snacks
while
the lowest number of per cent was breakfast and snacks
in sodium
.
Gerenally
speaking , Correct your spelling
Generally
it is clear that
the amount of breakfast was the same percentage
exactly in saturated fat and added sugar
while
the sodium
was just under 15 % .
On the other
hand
there is a wide disparity between the Add a comma
hand,
snacks
in three meals in addition
the highest proportion was in added sugar
after that the percentage
decreased around to half in saturated fat moreover
the
Correct article usage
apply
sodium
has taken the lower percentage
.
The percentage
of dinner the higher portion was in
Change preposition
apply
the
Correct article usage
apply
sodium
it
was 43% Correct pronoun usage
apply
then
the saturated fat made by under 40 % in contrast
added sugar
was the lower percentage
of dinner it was accounted
for 23 %.Wrong verb form
accounting
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Vocabulary: Rephrase your introduction. Words match: 65%.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words snacks, sodium, sugar, percentage with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "number of" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "percentage" was used 6 times.
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