Mrs. Barette, an English-speaking woman who lives in your town, has advertised for someone to help her in her home for few hours a day next summer. Write a letter to Mrs. Barette. In your letter suggest how you could help her in her home say why you would like to do this work explain when you will and will not available

Dear Mrs. Barette I'm writing to you to tell you
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am ready to help you in your house during
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. I know you are alone and it is hard to do all the house
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help
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you.
Although
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am going to be
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engaged
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with my family during the summer,
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will free myself
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you on
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and
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. Your
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sensibly
, Aziz
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task achievement
Ensure to address all points in the task prompt clearly and fully.
coherence cohesion
Pay attention to sentence structure for smoother flow.
coherence cohesion
Separate different ideas into distinct paragraphs.
suitable writing tone
Friendly and personal tone was well-suited for a letter application.
complete response
Includes a clear response to some of the key points such as availability and reason for helping.

Use a variety of complex and simple sentences

You should use complex sentences in your writing, but it does not mean that you should try to make all of our sentences complex.

‘Complex’ sentences are not actually very complex; they are just two or more simple sentences put together. Putting them together makes the essay more coherent and cohesive.

Examples:

I really want to study but I’m too tired.

I wore a warm coat because the weather was cold.

If action is not taken soon on climate change, global warming will get worse.

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