The pie charts below show energy production in Spain in 2008 and 2017. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The pie chart depicts the amount of
energy
production
in Spain between 2008 and 2017. It is clear from the graph that the
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production
covered the largest part of the chart in a specific year while
other sources of energy
production
had the lowest value compared with other products . To begain
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the
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production
was at 27% in 2008 and decreased to 23% in 2017 wherase
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where
production
had the most significant value which was 28% then
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production
almost doubled from 3% to 6% from 2008 to 2017. However
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, the renewable energy
was 9% and increased to 16%.Submitted by aldossaryfaten95 on
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