The pie charts below show energy production in Spain in 2008 and 2017. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The pie charts below show energy production in Spain in 2008 and 2017. Summarise the

information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The pie chart depicts the amount of
energy
production
in Spain between 2008 and 2017. It is clear from the graph that
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oil
production
covered the largest part of the chart in a specific year
while
other sources of
energy
production
had the lowest value compared with other products . To
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oil
production
was at 27% in 2008 and decreased to 23% in 2017
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whereas
where
coal
production
had the most significant value which was 28%
then
declinedto
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declined to
declined
17% in 2017.
On the other hand
. The other sources of
energy
production
almost doubled from 3% to 6% from 2008 to 2017.
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, there was a little
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gas
production
in both years .
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the
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words ,
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nuclear was at 11% in 2008 and jumped to 17% in 2017. Moving
further
, the renewable
energy
was 9% and increased to 16%.
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