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The graph below shows the proportion of four different materials that were recycled from 1982 to 2010 in a particular country. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The graph below shows the proportion of four different materials that were recycled from 1982 to 2010 in a particular country. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The line graph illustrates the percentage of four different materials,
such
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 as paper and cardboard, glass containers, aluminium cans, and
plastics
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, that were recycled between 1982 and 2010 in a particular country.
Overall
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, after analyzing the graph,
it is clear that
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 the highest recycling
rate
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 was achieved by paper and cardboard.
However
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, the recycling
rate
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 of
plastics
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 experienced the lowest proportion compared to other materials. On the one hand, paper and cardboard fluctuated from 1982 to 1992, reaching up to 80% before rapidly decreasing to 70%.
Consequently
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, the recycling
rate
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 of glass containers stood at exactly 50% and showed a dramatic decrease between 1982 and 1988, reaching 40%. Glass containers
then
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 followed an upward trend from 1990 to 2006.
On the other hand
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, the recycling
rate
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 for aluminium cans and
plastics
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 was approximately 2% and 11% in the initial phase, respectively. Meanwhile, aluminium cans consistently increased throughout the period, successfully reaching over 43%.
Moreover
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,
plastics
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 showed an insignificant change throughout the period and maintained its level below 10%.

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Vocabulary: Rephrase your introduction. Words match: 92%.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words plastics, rate with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "graph" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "showed" was used 2 times.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • proportion
  • recycled
  • materials
  • increased
  • paper and cardboard
  • plastic
  • glass
  • metal
  • significant increase
  • relatively stable
  • fluctuating
  • period
  • starting
  • reaching
  • gradually increasing
  • remained low
  • experienced
  • showed
  • greatest
  • proportion
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