Some people think that good health is a basic human need, so medical services should not be run by profit-making companies. Do the advantages of private health care outweigh the disadvantages?

In

this

day and age, some people hold a belief that private health care should not be operated for commercial

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.

While

the private sector could admittedly raise some concerns, I would argue that its benefits are more substantial and should not be dismissed. On the one hand, the commercialization of healthcare can be detrimental in certain cases. First of all, private health care services cost

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exorbitant,

therefore

, it is only restricted to the affluent class.

As a result

, the lower class

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can not afford

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costly medical services. Not only the low accessibility

this

type of service sometimes is not without overmedicalization. Patients are forced to take certain excessive procedures or unnecessary experiments with the purpose of gaining more money for the private centre.

However

,

this

phenomenon only exists in some extreme cases, most of the doctors and

staffs

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in the private

sectors

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follow the general medical standard.

On the other hand

, I

convinced

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that the aforementioned

drawbaks

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drawbacks

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pale in significance when compared to the benefit of private medical services. In terms

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individuals, patients using the private service will have a better experience because they

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save time and

efforts

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when waiting for their turns, compared to the public hospitals.

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private

centers

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can help ease the burdens of

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public health care as they have to deal with the shortage of

equipments

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and cutting-edge technology in medication. Nowadays, when more and more patients

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to the private

sectors

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, the problem of overloading and overcrowding in public hospitals has been mitigated. In conclusion, despite certain disadvantages that costly expense and overmedication can bring, I would contend that the advantages are far more pronounced.