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The graph below shows the percentage of male and female academic staff members across the faculties of a major university in 2012. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The graph below shows the percentage of male and female academic staff members across the faculties of a major university in 2012. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The bar graph illustrates the proportion of male and female academic staff members across the faculties of a major university in 2012.
Overall
, after analyzing the graph it is clearly apparent that the highest percentage of
male
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males
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 in
engineering
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 field.
Additionally
,
females
 are more active in
education
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 sector.  On the one hand, in the engineering
sector
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sector,
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 more than 82%
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of male
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male
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males
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are
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interest
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 in 2012.
However
, the
least
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lowest
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 number of boys were involved in education which is just nearly 22%. Apparently,
medicine
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 field had almost equal percentages of
male
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males
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 and
female
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females
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 at 45%. Meanwhile, business and science faculties have equal
level
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levels
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 at 68%.
On the other hand
, most
females
 were active in
education
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the education
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 faculty almost 48%.
Consequently
, in
law
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 the
females
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female's
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staffs
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staff
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 stood exactly 40%.
Moreover
, the least engagement of
females
 is clearly seen in
engineering
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the engineering
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 part.
Nevertheless
,
art
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, Science and business approximately 58%, 39% and 37%% respectively female are active in these sectors.
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Vocabulary: Rephrase your introduction. Words match: 77%.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words females with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "graph" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "percentage" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "almost" was used 2 times.
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